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Warning: This is a boy-love story and will contain male-on-male lovins!
This is a story I've had in my head for a while... I haven't really edited it or anything because I'm not sure that anybody will be interested in it. So please, if you like it (or don't!) let me know.
Characters:
Sergei Tikhonovitch Mironov
Age: 26
Race: Human
Hair: White, chin-length, often messy
Eyes: Hazel green
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 130 lbs
Skin: Slightly tanned, freckly
Kasimir
Age: 47 (looks 30)
Race: "Demon"
Hair: Shoulder-length, black dread locks
Eyes: Orange
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 185 lbs
Skin: Dark reddish-brown (brick) with black markings
Chapter two: [link]
This is a story I've had in my head for a while... I haven't really edited it or anything because I'm not sure that anybody will be interested in it. So please, if you like it (or don't!) let me know.
Characters:
Sergei Tikhonovitch Mironov
Age: 26
Race: Human
Hair: White, chin-length, often messy
Eyes: Hazel green
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 130 lbs
Skin: Slightly tanned, freckly
Kasimir
Age: 47 (looks 30)
Race: "Demon"
Hair: Shoulder-length, black dread locks
Eyes: Orange
Height: 6'5"
Weight: 185 lbs
Skin: Dark reddish-brown (brick) with black markings
Chapter two: [link]
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When it started, I was mildly confused about the typewriter bit, but I'm going to assume hat it will be explained more in later chapters.
When you started explaining the different creatures, I thought that Kasimir would be one of the avians, but it was actually very interesting to read something unexpected at every turn.
I like the apocalyptic turn as well, and especially the tying the creatures to the bible, and prehistoric times both.
Well written, and very intriguing. I cannot wait to see how the relationship will develop, and whether Kasimir is actually gone for good or not.